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Saturday, May 15, 2010

Your Smell of Coffee! - A 55 Words Fiction!



Silently, I sat there with your memories. My throat needed something to swallow. I made the coffee, the way you liked - creamy and strong!

Something clicked me, when I was about to take a sip. A pinch of salt that you put into the cup. After your departure, I realized it smells like you!


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5 comments:

Er. said...

I personally love Fiction 55, for its simplicity, and the thoughts which it provokes in one's mind. And this was well written! :) Loved it.

Shady West Side said...

Hey...that was nice...old memories can come back at even the most minor of provocations

Shahid

anatreek said...

Subtle, and powerful!

Rachana said...

The Virgin Author: Recently, I learned about this format and liked it very much..glad u liked this.

Shahid: indeed, memories can come back anytime...thanx for liking my story.

Ana_treek: thank you for appreciating my lines!

Rupesh Agarwal said...

wow... that clicked right where it shud... nice.. amazing.. guess i need to follow more of fiction 55! :) :)

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