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Friday, May 14, 2010

And We Cried - A 55 Words Fiction!

The sky was becoming heavier that night and so was my heart. We both were showing signs of venting out the hidden anguish. After some time, the sky cried in full…Unable to control, I released myself later too.

Everyone can see the sky’s voluminous tears but mine remains unheard and unseen!

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VIJI said...

Beautiful. I really liked the imagery. I think replacing "..unheard and unseen!" with "..unheard and unseen..." would make it stronger.


Rachana said...

Viji: thank you for your valuable suggestion!

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