tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post3613209090999738896..comments2024-01-24T17:05:46.422+05:30Comments on My Open Space: तीन त्रिवेणी- 10Rachanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07404911530755953836noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-39030729792287945682010-10-21T11:51:28.168+05:302010-10-21T11:51:28.168+05:30Yeah, I've seen one more blog featuring "...Yeah, I've seen one more blog featuring "Triveni". Interesting!Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-41825903558504978772010-10-20T22:52:11.938+05:302010-10-20T22:52:11.938+05:30Tarang,
thanks for your comment. The above poems ...Tarang,<br /><br />thanks for your comment. The above poems are written in 'triveni'format which is developed by eminent poet, Gulzar. Please go through the link to know more about 'Triveni'<br /><br />http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Triveni_%28poetry%29 <br /><br />Thanks,<br />RachanaRachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07404911530755953836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-26238296816227174982010-10-20T17:38:01.138+05:302010-10-20T17:38:01.138+05:30Someone had told me that if you can't conclude...Someone had told me that if you can't conclude a story in 200 words then you even can't complete it in 2000 words. You're the perfect example of "concluding in short". Your above poem is good but it could be a single poem instead of collection of 3 poems. And if you don't mind I would advise you to change the word "Chand". Chand to waise bhi thanda hi hota hai. It is just an opinion so, don't take it otherwise.Tarang Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10346902969017351667noreply@blogger.com