tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post3118521900364157013..comments2024-01-24T17:05:46.422+05:30Comments on My Open Space: Escape!Rachanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07404911530755953836noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-77963734852540888582010-05-06T14:24:24.761+05:302010-05-06T14:24:24.761+05:30A Suicide poem? that was so different. An utterly ...A Suicide poem? that was so different. An utterly dejected and depressed person I guess. Good one :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-42501349697376089402010-05-04T01:07:30.584+05:302010-05-04T01:07:30.584+05:30Well the feelings of a lonely person on verge of c...Well the feelings of a lonely person on verge of committing suicide put in a nice manner.. I dont feel, as some hav cmmntd, tht the wrds shud be more weighty or dark.. liked ur take!Vipul Groverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14759165630549569179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-27820020146568850012010-05-03T12:14:50.822+05:302010-05-03T12:14:50.822+05:30A poem with suicide as theme ....but your word did...A poem with suicide as theme ....but your word didn't make it dark....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-75262739473004350482010-05-02T23:49:21.435+05:302010-05-02T23:49:21.435+05:30hey the concept of free flowing... excellent...:)hey the concept of free flowing... excellent...:)Siddhesh Kabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05949517024873104589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-32264912408527478762010-05-02T19:13:45.251+05:302010-05-02T19:13:45.251+05:30@Nethra, @Saro, @Pawan, @Mahesh, @Geeta, @Sureinde...@Nethra, @Saro, @Pawan, @Mahesh, @Geeta, @Sureinder, @Sourav, @The Virgin Author - thank you so much for your comments and best wishes!<br /><br />@The Fool and @Leo - sorry about the typo...I have changed the title. Thanks!Rachanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07404911530755953836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-68153973831996128272010-05-02T15:37:56.020+05:302010-05-02T15:37:56.020+05:30Like a bird, free falling :)All the luck with BATO...Like a bird, free falling :)All the luck with BATOM 10Sarohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07393545459502930409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-1197674453161328532010-05-02T15:28:23.727+05:302010-05-02T15:28:23.727+05:30Somehow this poem impressed me a lot, the starting...Somehow this poem impressed me a lot, the starting according to me has a surreal feel. Sometimes the frills are not needed to make a poem work and this one is a good example for that!<br /><br />Great going!<br />Cheers :)pawanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07623152354184765339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-58459013890419960102010-05-02T14:00:18.484+05:302010-05-02T14:00:18.484+05:30seems simple... but it said more than it contained...seems simple... but it said more than it contained...<br />liked the first four lines....Mahesh Aadhya Kalalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08671369216676666618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-75135107469296931262010-05-02T03:56:09.735+05:302010-05-02T03:56:09.735+05:30You poured down your feelings brilliantly...
All...You poured down your feelings brilliantly...<br /><br /><br />All the Best for BAT 10geetahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03457298403913504789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-78508526317382418122010-05-02T01:18:52.477+05:302010-05-02T01:18:52.477+05:30You have penned down loneliness your way beautiful...You have penned down loneliness your way beautifully and I like the poem very much. Thanks for writing this.<br /><br /><a href="http://sureindran.blogspot.com/2010/04/escape.html" rel="nofollow">Sureindran R. - Escape</a>Sureindranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02392601094414631609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-39337013303865485752010-05-01T17:56:01.190+05:302010-05-01T17:56:01.190+05:30We all need that free flowing, you managed to spea...We all need that free flowing, you managed to speak your mind only with such few simple and nice words .. I really appreciate that! :)<br /><br />One of the bests in the BAT this time ! :)<br /><br />All the best !<br /><a href="http://sourav-pandey.blogspot.com/2010/05/escape.html/" rel="nofollow">..escape ! </a>Shttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18379997271775437852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-51850118388194322982010-05-01T17:16:49.989+05:302010-05-01T17:16:49.989+05:30The title is flawed. The poem ain't. Well writ...The title is flawed. The poem ain't. Well written. <br /><br />-<br />PS: Visit http://www.bit.ly/shewasenoughEr.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11225359974373760374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-3606906808554702622010-05-01T12:36:45.269+05:302010-05-01T12:36:45.269+05:30I agree with TF.. this was a nice poem, and when n...I agree with TF.. this was a nice poem, and when no one wants to give us company, we all feel like this.. plz change the title soon.. its a good poem, shd not be DQed coz of that! :)<br /><br /><a href="http://1mind2worlds.blogspot.com/2010/05/escape.html" rel="nofollow">Escape</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-62748078723845162842010-05-01T11:54:57.488+05:302010-05-01T11:54:57.488+05:30by the way, typo in title. also blog-a-ton rules s...by the way, typo in title. also blog-a-ton rules say post title must be 'escape' - not a word more not a word less. so i suggest you change before marshal disqualifies you.T F Carthickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417105427125776020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-65879599647419641462010-05-01T11:53:21.074+05:302010-05-01T11:53:21.074+05:30nice poetry. it was brilliant from a conceptual po...nice poetry. it was brilliant from a conceptual point of view on what you one things standing on top of a hill contemplating suicide. but felt the words could have been richer. but then that is me. simplicity of course has its own charm. best of luck for the blog-a-ton.T F Carthickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12417105427125776020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9157292937493553342.post-32206559040954533262010-05-01T11:49:21.287+05:302010-05-01T11:49:21.287+05:30Wow! Nice words and it would be the exact words i ...Wow! Nice words and it would be the exact words i would be quoting when I am standing on a mountain top (only if i didn't suffer height-phobia).<br />Nice poem! :)<br />All the best for blog-a-ton! :)Nethrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02134454114991583342noreply@blogger.com